http://www.dannybeattie.co.uk
Calling the spelling police and critics.
Moderator: ben306
J.DOOP wrote:You are such a smarmy know it all cunt sometimes.
Vidal wrote:Critique from the clique! 1) Head on over to the pricing section for more information. - Make this a hyperlink, I've read it and now I have to find the pricing page link. 2) Using digital DSLR's - by definition it is either a digital SLR or a DSLR. Also there's no possessive apostrophe. 3) Choose me for your wedding or event and you get more than just a photographer. You get personality and someone able and willing to go that extra mile. -- Danny Beattie" - The closing double quotes should be after the word mile. Consider scanning your signature as an image and appending that rather than the plain text, however up to you - just a stylistic point. If using an image though, don't forget the alt tags for those with images turned off. 4) competative - get a dictionary mate! 5)- Evening entertainment. First dance, guests dancing/laughing/drunk etc - some may not want to see that, or be reminded! Why not just put something on the lines of "having a great time" 5) our competitors pricing structures - should have an apostrophe. our competitors' pricing structures 6) within 2 hours. - I work nights - I'm going to test how often you are with a client at 04:30! Why not say within 24 hours, gives you a bit of scope so that you are not tied to your emails. Some of the site doesn't validate - check on http://validator.w3.org/ - run each page through it and see what you can optimise, with so many different browsers on the market, mobiles etc then having standard markup will ensure that your site can be viewed as you intended by the majority of people. An excellent site though - good luck. V.
nath69uk wrote:Sentt someone your way today and I believe she has booked?
LM wrote:but when my tripod's fully extended, I can't see the view finder without being on my tip toes
Albino-Jay wrote:nice one Jaffa. Hat off to you mate for lkeeping it at it, getting stuck and mainly for having the bottle to take it this far, onto a nice little earner there pal. Well impressed.
Jaffa wrote:Don't even talk to me, the way you've neglected your camera of late insults me.
LM wrote:but when my tripod's fully extended, I can't see the view finder without being on my tip toes
Albino-Jay wrote::( I still havn't got round to getting a proper lens for it, I'm using some cobbled up old manual shit thats attached with a thread adapter lol it's makes togging a reet pain, they're a twat to focus so until i get enough spare cash t spunk on a lens it's the way it's gonna be im afraid
Mrs House car beer golf and fishing costs some serious dohage lol
Return to Photography Discussion
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 0 guests