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Making that next step....

PostPosted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 10:54 am
by Jaffa
http://www.dannybeattie.co.uk :tu:

Calling the spelling police and critics.

PostPosted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:04 am
by simon justin nixon
Genuinley impressed mate. Really well crafted site, and some excellent photography. :tu: Good luck with it taking off, hope it works for you.

PostPosted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:10 am
by Jaffa
4700 hits in 2 weeks aint too bad. I'm just being very sly about posting the link in certain places to get linkbacks and improve my google rankings.

I tell you what though, these past few weeks I've been as busy as ever. Really push yourself at one event/wedding and you'll get booked again off the back of that.

PostPosted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:28 am
by Ian Watkins
Its very good Jaffa.

Spelling Police!

Pricing Page-

Speaches is spelt Speeches

PostPosted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:41 am
by Vidal
Critique from the clique! 1) Head on over to the pricing section for more information. - Make this a hyperlink, I've read it and now I have to find the pricing page link. 2) Using digital DSLR's - by definition it is either a digital SLR or a DSLR. Also there's no possessive apostrophe. 3) Choose me for your wedding or event and you get more than just a photographer. You get personality and someone able and willing to go that extra mile. -- Danny Beattie" - The closing double quotes should be after the word mile. Consider scanning your signature as an image and appending that rather than the plain text, however up to you - just a stylistic point. If using an image though, don't forget the alt tags for those with images turned off. 4) competative - get a dictionary mate! 5)- Evening entertainment. First dance, guests dancing/laughing/drunk etc - some may not want to see that, or be reminded! Why not just put something on the lines of "having a great time" 5) our competitors pricing structures - should have an apostrophe. our competitors' pricing structures 6) within 2 hours. - I work nights - I'm going to test how often you are with a client at 04:30! Why not say within 24 hours, gives you a bit of scope so that you are not tied to your emails. Some of the site doesn't validate - check on http://validator.w3.org/ - run each page through it and see what you can optimise, with so many different browsers on the market, mobiles etc then having standard markup will ensure that your site can be viewed as you intended by the majority of people. An excellent site though - good luck. V.

PostPosted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:56 am
by Jaffa
Vidal wrote:Critique from the clique! 1) Head on over to the pricing section for more information. - Make this a hyperlink, I've read it and now I have to find the pricing page link. 2) Using digital DSLR's - by definition it is either a digital SLR or a DSLR. Also there's no possessive apostrophe. 3) Choose me for your wedding or event and you get more than just a photographer. You get personality and someone able and willing to go that extra mile. -- Danny Beattie" - The closing double quotes should be after the word mile. Consider scanning your signature as an image and appending that rather than the plain text, however up to you - just a stylistic point. If using an image though, don't forget the alt tags for those with images turned off. 4) competative - get a dictionary mate! 5)- Evening entertainment. First dance, guests dancing/laughing/drunk etc - some may not want to see that, or be reminded! Why not just put something on the lines of "having a great time" 5) our competitors pricing structures - should have an apostrophe. our competitors' pricing structures 6) within 2 hours. - I work nights - I'm going to test how often you are with a client at 04:30! Why not say within 24 hours, gives you a bit of scope so that you are not tied to your emails. Some of the site doesn't validate - check on http://validator.w3.org/ - run each page through it and see what you can optimise, with so many different browsers on the market, mobiles etc then having standard markup will ensure that your site can be viewed as you intended by the majority of people. An excellent site though - good luck. V.


Uber. Made the corrections, I knew posting here would result in help.

The problem with Validator is, the site I'm using is run by Photium. I have no direct control over actuall coding/formatting etc.

PostPosted: Tue Jun 15, 2010 3:46 pm
by Gaz
as stated speeches is has been mis-spelt.

PostPosted: Tue Jun 29, 2010 6:41 pm
by nath69uk
Sentt someone your way today and I believe she has booked?

PostPosted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 1:17 pm
by Jaffa
nath69uk wrote:Sentt someone your way today and I believe she has booked?


LOL.

"How did you hear about me?"

"Nathan XXX recommended you, said he knows you quite well"

"Huh?"

Something along those lines. Going to see her on Saturday.

Does this mean I have to be nice to you now? :cry:

I owe you a pint, or some cleaning product, or a new dog? :pmsl:

PostPosted: Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:25 pm
by nath69uk
Don't owe me fuck all fella, good luck and I hope she books

PostPosted: Thu Jul 01, 2010 10:53 pm
by Albino-Jay
nice one Jaffa. Hat off to you mate for lkeeping it at it, getting stuck and mainly for having the bottle to take it this far, onto a nice little earner there pal. Well impressed.

PostPosted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 9:20 am
by Jaffa
Albino-Jay wrote:nice one Jaffa. Hat off to you mate for lkeeping it at it, getting stuck and mainly for having the bottle to take it this far, onto a nice little earner there pal. Well impressed.


Don't even talk to me, the way you've neglected your camera of late insults me. :cry:

PostPosted: Fri Jul 02, 2010 9:24 am
by Kev_Mk3
Ill keep a ear open for people in need of photography Danny :)

PostPosted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 4:02 pm
by Albino-Jay
Jaffa wrote:Don't even talk to me, the way you've neglected your camera of late insults me. :cry:



:( I still havn't got round to getting a proper lens for it, I'm using some cobbled up old manual shit thats attached with a thread adapter lol it's makes togging a reet pain, they're a twat to focus so until i get enough spare cash t spunk on a lens it's the way it's gonna be im afraid :(

Mrs House car beer golf and fishing costs some serious dohage lol

PostPosted: Tue Jul 06, 2010 6:07 pm
by Hugh Jeers
Albino-Jay wrote::( I still havn't got round to getting a proper lens for it, I'm using some cobbled up old manual shit thats attached with a thread adapter lol it's makes togging a reet pain, they're a twat to focus so until i get enough spare cash t spunk on a lens it's the way it's gonna be im afraid :(

Mrs House car beer golf and fishing costs some serious dohage lol


Give golf up. It's a good walk spoiled.





Where do you play? I played Haigh Hall but usually do the 9 holer near me..