Making that next step....

[Jaffa]

www.dannybeattie.co.uk :tu:

Calling the spelling police and critics.

[Mike H]

Genuinley impressed mate. Really well crafted site, and some excellent photography. :tu: Good luck with it taking off, hope it works for you.

[Jaffa]

4700 hits in 2 weeks aint too bad. I'm just being very sly about posting the link in certain places to get linkbacks and improve my google rankings.

I tell you what though, these past few weeks I've been as busy as ever. Really push yourself at one event/wedding and you'll get booked again off the back of that.

[hellonpluto]

Its very good Jaffa.

Spelling Police!

Pricing Page-

Speaches is spelt Speeches

[Vidal]

Critique from the clique! 1) Head on over to the pricing section for more information. - Make this a hyperlink, I've read it and now I have to find the pricing page link. 2) Using digital DSLR's - by definition it is either a digital SLR or a DSLR. Also there's no possessive apostrophe. 3) Choose me for your wedding or event and you get more than just a photographer. You get personality and someone able and willing to go that extra mile. -- Danny Beattie" - The closing double quotes should be after the word mile. Consider scanning your signature as an image and appending that rather than the plain text, however up to you - just a stylistic point. If using an image though, don't forget the alt tags for those with images turned off. 4) competative - get a dictionary mate! 5)- Evening entertainment. First dance, guests dancing/laughing/drunk etc - some may not want to see that, or be reminded! Why not just put something on the lines of "having a great time" 5) our competitors pricing structures - should have an apostrophe. our competitors' pricing structures 6) within 2 hours. - I work nights - I'm going to test how often you are with a client at 04:30! Why not say within 24 hours, gives you a bit of scope so that you are not tied to your emails. Some of the site doesn't validate - check on http://validator.w3.org/ - run each page through it and see what you can optimise, with so many different browsers on the market, mobiles etc then having standard markup will ensure that your site can be viewed as you intended by the majority of people. An excellent site though - good luck. V.

[Jaffa]

Critique from the clique! 1) Head on over to the pricing section for more information. - Make this a hyperlink, I've read it and now I have to find the pricing page link. 2) Using digital DSLR's - by definition it is either a digital SLR or a DSLR. Also there's no possessive apostrophe. 3) Choose me for your wedding or event and you get more than just a photographer. You get personality and someone able and willing to go that extra mile. -- Danny Beattie" - The closing double quotes should be after the word mile. Consider scanning your signature as an image and appending that rather than the plain text, however up to you - just a stylistic point. If using an image though, don't forget the alt tags for those with images turned off. 4) competative - get a dictionary mate! 5)- Evening entertainment. First dance, guests dancing/laughing/drunk etc - some may not want to see that, or be reminded! Why not just put something on the lines of "having a great time" 5) our competitors pricing structures - should have an apostrophe. our competitors' pricing structures 6) within 2 hours. - I work nights - I'm going to test how often you are with a client at 04:30! Why not say within 24 hours, gives you a bit of scope so that you are not tied to your emails. Some of the site doesn't validate - check on http://validator.w3.org/ - run each page through it and see what you can optimise, with so many different browsers on the market, mobiles etc then having standard markup will ensure that your site can be viewed as you intended by the majority of people. An excellent site though - good luck. V.

Uber. Made the corrections, I knew posting here would result in help.

The problem with Validator is, the site I'm using is run by Photium. I have no direct control over actuall coding/formatting etc.

[Gaz]

as stated speeches is has been mis-spelt.

[nath69uk]

Sentt someone your way today and I believe she has booked?

[Jaffa]

Sentt someone your way today and I believe she has booked?

LOL.

"How did you hear about me?"

"Nathan XXX recommended you, said he knows you quite well"

"Huh?"

Something along those lines. Going to see her on Saturday.

Does this mean I have to be nice to you now? :cry:

I owe you a pint, or some cleaning product, or a new dog? :pmsl:

[nath69uk]

Don't owe me fuck all fella, good luck and I hope she books

[Albino-Jay]

nice one Jaffa. Hat off to you mate for lkeeping it at it, getting stuck and mainly for having the bottle to take it this far, onto a nice little earner there pal. Well impressed.

[Jaffa]

nice one Jaffa. Hat off to you mate for lkeeping it at it, getting stuck and mainly for having the bottle to take it this far, onto a nice little earner there pal. Well impressed.

Don't even talk to me, the way you've neglected your camera of late insults me. :cry:

[Kev_Mk3]

Ill keep a ear open for people in need of photography Danny :)

[Albino-Jay]

Don't even talk to me, the way you've neglected your camera of late insults me. :cry:


:( I still havn't got round to getting a proper lens for it, I'm using some cobbled up old manual shit thats attached with a thread adapter lol it's makes togging a reet pain, they're a twat to focus so until i get enough spare cash t spunk on a lens it's the way it's gonna be im afraid :(

Mrs House car beer golf and fishing costs some serious dohage lol

[Hugh Jeers]

:( I still havn't got round to getting a proper lens for it, I'm using some cobbled up old manual shit thats attached with a thread adapter lol it's makes togging a reet pain, they're a twat to focus so until i get enough spare cash t spunk on a lens it's the way it's gonna be im afraid :(

Mrs House car beer golf and fishing costs some serious dohage lol

Give golf up. It's a good walk spoiled.





Where do you play? I played Haigh Hall but usually do the 9 holer near me..

[Albino-Jay]

Give golf up. It's a good walk spoiled.





Where do you play? I played Haigh Hall but usually do the 9 holer near me..

used to play a lot of pitch n putt as a youngster, getting back into it, been playing heaton mersey pitch n putt a lot in the week then william wrie in flixton. Like I said just getting backinto it then going to hit afew more courses. Loving it at the mo

[nath69uk]

Jaffa you big gay bear, did you meet Gemma?

[Hugh Jeers]

used to play a lot of pitch n putt as a youngster, getting back into it, been playing heaton mersey pitch n putt a lot in the week then william wrie in flixton. Like I said just getting backinto it then going to hit afew more courses. Loving it at the mo

It's an expensive hobby. I enjoy it, even though I'm very hit and miss :pmsl: Used to go with the neighbour, but upset him because I didn't pipe him off when he was showing me his new Callaway driver... :roll:

[Jaffa]

Jaffa you big gay bear, did you meet Gemma?

Yes. Will be meeting them at the venue in a few weeks hun x

[Albino-Jay]

It's an expensive hobby. I enjoy it, even though I'm very hit and miss :pmsl: Used to go with the neighbour, but upset him because I didn't pipe him off when he was showing me his new Callaway driver... :roll:


hmmm it can be expensive looking at the price of some courses, but at the min it's not too bad. William wrie is a municipal one and only costs £14 a round or £5.50 all day mondays so we usually go after work.

I'm just using a bit of a mis match set of clubs atm bt it'll do till i decide to get some decent ones.

Proper frustrating though when you mess up knowing full well you can hit some much better shots. Nearly had a hole in one the other day 140 yarder with an 8 iron and it landed at the cup hit the flag and bounced out was gutted :(