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Jaffa
15th June 2009, 06:27 AM
http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3593/3626166807_885f7f55e7.jpg?v=0

Not so sure on this one - alot of editing has gone into it. Full size here. (http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3593/3626166807_885f7f55e7_b.jpg)

I also snapped this tonight, which I'm fond of being my first light stretch pic (if that's the phrase for it)

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2423/3626977534_9543197bb4.jpg

Full size (http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2423/3626977534_9543197bb4_b.jpg)

C&C Welcomed

El Negro von Coon
15th June 2009, 11:49 AM
I like both but the train pic is the best imo. Very well captured! :D

See if you can do the same again but try to catch it around sunset so there's some interesting colours in the sky... I think that would be the icing on the cake.

LM
15th June 2009, 05:40 PM
I like them both, allthough long exposures of light trails have never really done much for me, so the first one is my favourite. I love the black in the clouds, really makes the shot look moody.

Hugh Jeers
15th June 2009, 05:55 PM
You can get some good shots if you're willing to hang about when the sun is setting. I did this one two years ago, so forgive the quality of it, but the idea is there:

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/889/dscf2353b.jpg

And another one which, for someone with a little more experience, could have pulled off slightly better than me.

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/6276/dscf2351i.jpg

They're really good shots though fella :tu:

Wizza
15th June 2009, 06:32 PM
Top work Jaffa Cake!

CandyApple
16th June 2009, 12:16 AM
Both pics show a potential for greatness, but here comes some critique.:oops:

The first has excellent contrasting colours, but I've never been a fan of the sepia sort of rose colour in pics.
I would have liked it if the sign wasn't present in the light stretch, it ruins the effect for me.

But as always you deliver some quality workmanship.;)

Mike H
16th June 2009, 06:36 AM
Top one is good. But it's missing something... and I think it's some sort of focal point.... you look at the picture, but yet you're not quite sure where the focus is on it...

I'm not a fan of light stretch pictures unless they are fooking amazing though.

Good work mate, you are a naturally talented photographer.

potty lotty
16th June 2009, 04:41 PM
Great photos, i really like the first one.